The line graph below in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012

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The line graph below in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012

The line graph illustrates the quantity of coffee exported from (3 countries) Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between the year 2002 and 2012.

Overall, Brazil remained the nation who traded most significant amount of coffee throughout the period between 2002 and 2012. While country Colombia saw many fluctuations until 2008 with relatively less export of coffee as compared to Costa Rica.

In year 2002, Brazil delivered nearly about 12 million kg coffee with gradually increasing the figure to 15 million kg in 2006. Although comprising highs and lows (18-20 million kg ) in coffee sale abroad, the nation had reach maximum of 25 million kg in 2012.

In comparison to remaining countries, Costa Rica exported high amount of coffee (15 million kg ) in 2002, before steadily falling to around 6 million kg in year of 2006. Later the country gradually rose its trading in subsequent years reaching exactly 20 million kg in 2012 and 15 million kg in 2012. Colombia had lowest level of market coffee overseas (5 million kg ) in year 2002 and before dropping steeply to 2 million kg in 2008, Colombia traded 12 million kg of coffee abroad in 2006 where Costa Rica saw the decline in coffee exportation in that same year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rted high amount of coffee 15 million kg in 2002 before steadily falling to aroun...
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...l of market coffee overseas 5 million kg in year 2002 and before dropping steeply...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8487804878 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46535060368 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473170731707 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 205.0 22.4926829268 911% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 994.0 112.824112599 881% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 205.0 22.9334400587 894% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.23603664747 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277669033421 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.277669033421 0.103423049105 268% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247651579089 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152552628495 0.0819641961636 186% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 103.9 13.2329268293 785% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -111.22 61.2550243902 -182% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 79.7 10.3012195122 774% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.33 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.04 8.06136585366 211% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.4329268293 481% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 84.0 10.9970731707 764% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 11.0658536585 497% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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