The line graph compares average maximum temperatures on a daily basis for two cities in New Zealand Auckland and Christchurch and two UK cities London and Edinburgh over one-year period.
It is clear that New Zealand cities' daily maximum temperatures tend to reach rather high at the beginning and the end of the year and low in the middle of the year. By contrast, two cities in the United Kingdom experience moderately hot weather in the middle of the year, cold weather in spring and winter.
In January, the figures for average temperatures in Auckland and Christchurch reach at around 24 and 23 degrees respectively while the weather in London and Edinburgh are significantly colder, at about 6 degrees. July marks the point at which maximum temperatures on a daily basis in two New Zealand cities fall considerably by approximately 9 degrees in Auckland and 11 degrees in Christchurch. On the contrary, temperatures for London and Edinburgh rise dramatically to around 22 and 17 degrees respectively, the highest temperatures in a year for both cities.
In the last month of the year, temperatures in Auckland and Christchurch grow significantly to around 23 degrees, while the winter in London and Edinburgh are as cold as they are at the beginning of the year, at around 6 degrees.
- People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment?
- The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in United Kingdom.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 67
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98611111111 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07967124869 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439814814815 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.7253291694 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.857142857 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8571428571 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400806909177 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216333141792 0.103423049105 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147803060095 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286871490793 0.15604864568 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171304170307 0.0819641961636 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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