People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment?
It is gradually becoming a common knowledge for people in modern society that the environment plays a substantial role in our life. A range of environmental issues such as global warming, climate change has awaken our obligation to take actions to protect the environment. Nevertheless, a large proportion of population are still indifferent. To my opinion, there are two major reasons for this phenomenon and several measures are needed to be taken.
The first reason why people are frequently throwing trash out into environment is that they think their minor activities don't have a great impact on the environment. Their very action can't lead to an instant consequence, as a result individuals just keep doing the wrong things which harm our environment. Secondly, it's largely the government's responsibility to take strict measures to the environmental problems according to the citizens. To most people, environmental issues are somehow so complicated, out of their hand and majestic that they cannot take control of.
In order to modify those mistaken attitudes towards environmental issues, most importantly the government should take proactive measures such as making more public service advertisements to encourage people to consume more green products instead of disposable goods that are harmful to the environment and grant reward for those who have been enthusiastically cleaning up the neighborhood as well.
In conclusion, there are two principal causes for individuals' indifference to the environment as mentioned and actions should be taken immediately to encourage people to protect the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'common knowledge'.
Suggestion: common knowledge
It is gradually becoming a common knowledge for people in modern society that the e...
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Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'awakened'.
Suggestion: awakened
...h as global warming, climate change has awaken our obligation to take actions to prote...
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Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... that they think their minor activities dont have a great impact on the environment....
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Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...t on the environment. Their very action cant lead to an instant consequence, as a re...
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Line 2, column 316, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...s which harm our environment. Secondly, its largely the governments responsibility ...
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Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
... environment. Secondly, its largely the governments responsibility to take strict measures ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55870445344 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2403437926 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.7410172231 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.3 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317491061578 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112130285792 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758326245656 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199208610664 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673606785987 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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