The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table belowgives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from. Write a report for a universitylecturer describing the information given.

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The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below
gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from. Write a report for a university
lecturer describing the information given.

The line diagram and tabular data show total number of international tourists visit Australia and number of visitors from different countries over three decades time period. All numbers given in millions terms.

First of all, the graph shows the upward trend in overseas visitors in Australia from 1975 to 2005. In 1975, the total number of overseas tourist was 10 millions and after 10 years it rose to 15 millions. This trend was continue to rise and finally it reach it peak in 2005 about 31 millions international visitors visit Australia.

The statistic data of table represents the total number of visitors came from different countries. It noticeable from the data Japanese was very interested to visit Australia. The number rose to 3.2 to 12 millions in just 30 years. South Korean was second highest to visit this country. 9.1 millions tourists noticed in 2005, which was almost three times as compared to 1975. The people from USA and China show similar growth in overseas tourist. 1.1 European tourist visit Australia in 1975 and it was rose more than four times in given time horizon and recorded 4.5 million visitors in 2005.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reaches'?
Suggestion: reaches
...end was continue to rise and finally it reach it peak in 2005 about 31 millions inter...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'peaks'?
Suggestion: peaks
...ontinue to rise and finally it reach it peak in 2005 about 31 millions international...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, as to, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96354166667 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44078637964 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2211219964 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4166666667 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232368559983 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100141698851 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655156383644 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187422921324 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346952195142 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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