People living in large cities have to face many problem in everyday life. What are those problems ? Should government encourage people to move regional area ?
Today, larger city of any country is overcrowded and the city dwellers faces many issues in their day-to-day life. There are several problems faces by people in their daily routine life. I believe government take some steps to motivate people to settle in rural areas. My inclination is justified further.
There are several issues which affects the daily routine life of people. First of all, pollution is a huge problem for citizens. Thesedays, every one have their personal vehicle and they use everyday instead of public transportation and this causes huge pollution in city. Pollution also affect the health of people and over pollution leads the dangerous diseases. Such as, lung cancer. Moreover, traffic is biggest problem for metropolitan town. For example, survey shows that people waste their 8% time of their daily life in traffic.
There are several steps that government should take to motivate people for move towards the countryside. Firstly, authority should develop infrastructure of regional area. For example, government should build some entertainment facility, society with modern amenities and some sports related facilities like, gardens, indoor and outdoor sports complex and many more. Secondly, improveMent in transportation facility and frequency between downtown and rural area. For example, offer low-cost transport facility and improvise the vehicle with the help of technology. Last but not least, improve some basic need like, fresh water, drainage and sewage system.
In conclusion, it is fact that many people faces so many problem in their monotonous routine such as, pollution, traffic and experience lifestyle with low salary. However, government authority take some steps like, improve rural area infrastructure connectivity between countryside and city area to encourage people for migrating in suburban area of town.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62056737589 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72028346976 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.558395704 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4210526316 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8421052632 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327543097928 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916279564966 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076806595276 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207660287502 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068345859922 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.72 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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