Line graph : channel one news viewing figures.
The line graph elucidates the number of viewing figures of channel one news from January to December. At first glance, it is evident that the most noticeable fluctuation of viewing figures occurred at 11 p.m. and is measured in millions of viewers per day.
To begin with, there was a gradual palpitation in the number of viewers at 6.pm. between January, which was at just below 5 millions, and November, which made up at just over 3 millions. By the end of the period shown, it jumped slightly to achieve at well beyond 3 millions. Furthermore, January to May witnessed a significant upsurge for the amount of viewers at 09.30 p.m., and erratically, in the next 7 months, it oscillated dramatically and finished at just across 3 millions.
In accordance with the other aspects, By January, the number of viewers at 11 p.m. stood at well under 1 million, unexpectedly it uplifted tremendously to just beyond 4 millions and dropped enormously to just less 1 than million in the next 12 months. In contrast, the total of viewers at 1 p.m. remained stable over the entire period in which it ended at well beneath 2 millions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
... dropped enormously to just less 1 than million in the next 12 months. In contrast, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, well, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76020408163 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82081035409 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55612244898 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0754708697 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.625 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0912484738541 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686224755278 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164813718569 0.0843802449381 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106348822357 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150399946919 0.0819641961636 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.