The line graph illustrates the proportion of population aged 65 over between 1940-2040 in a period of 100 years in three different countries.They are: USA, Sweden and Japan
The Illustration shows the countries such as: USA, Sweden and Japan the increasing of their population from 1940 till 2040.In 1940 the proportion of the aged people who were over 65 old was between 5 to 10 percent. Sweden and USA kept their increasing of the population while decreased in Japan.
In 1940, there was a higher percentage of older people over 65 living in USA (around 10%) than Sweden (around 7%) followed by Japan (5%). The ageing population in the USA grew constantly reached up to 15% in the year 1980 and it’s expected to continue grow up till 2040 by 25%(or more than that) same as in Sweden the percentage of aged people (over 65 years old) grew up from about in 1940 to 15% in 2000 and according to the graph Swedish population is going to grow by 25% in 2040.
Incontrast, the aged people (over 65 years old) remains the lowest which has 5% until 2005.However the Japanese population is expect to grow up and reach the highest point 30% in 2040.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49431818182 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46283716281 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.4066369245 43.030603864 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.2 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374877290738 0.215688989381 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213817919718 0.103423049105 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671655853007 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258332713029 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782495148067 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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