Universities should accept equal members of male and female students in every subject.
Many people believe that there should be equality in regards gender fairness into the high level of educational authorities for which ever subject he/she would like to apply. However, others disagree with that point of view. This essay will take a closer look at the matters, showing my opinion and giving fair reasons to support it.
On the one hand it is true to say that there are factors leading the people to think, there should be an equal amount of each gender student. First, some of the subjects are not appropriate for students related to gender, for example: a male undergraduate could perform far better in electrical engineering than a female learner because a man could work under pressure. Second, there is one more example in related with heavy physical work, if you have to mix concrete by hands and bricklaying as it is mentioned earlier a man could be preferred for the this kind of job. Third, by the given statistic of students performances in colleges/universities in practical matters the male learner is more skilled than the female.
On the other hand the fore mentioned might not be completely true. Firstly, ages ago women were not accepted to study what they would like, nevertheless, with the passing ages and ages and lots of fights for their rights now they are available to study whatever would like. Secondly, nowadays women can do or be whatever she desire , even the statistics are showing that the biggest percentage of female managers and solicitors in this ages are more than 60%. Thirdly, despite the gender many women have taken work place or study subjects supposed to be for men, here some example: these ages more and more women are choosing to study and work as a police officer and based on statistic women are performing very well in their study and job. In addition, despite the gender , there are women doing men’s work even better than men will do and the opposite , hence it is not important the gender but the passion and motivation for the given work or study.
In conclusion, there are evidences providing that claims are true , yet I am inclined to agree with the last one mentioned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rk, if you have to mix concrete by hands and bricklaying as it is mentioned earli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82655826558 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57969593711 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539295392954 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4885257303 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3846153846 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1538461538 7.06120827912 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132443510871 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046653046395 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575037407698 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073365894883 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693113019275 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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