The line graph indicates the total of foreign students and the bar chart presents the forecast for the percentage of students studying in a nation between 2010 and 2024

Essay topics:

The line graph indicates the total of foreign students, and the bar chart presents the forecast for the percentage of students studying in a nation between 2010 and 2024.

The purpose of this report is to provide data pertaining to foreign students and students studying in a nation as reported over a 14 year period starting in 2020.
In terms of the line graph, overall, the dominant tendency was upward in the total of foreign students. In detail, it started at 40,000 in 2010. Then, there was a fluctuation to over 40,000 in 2014. Suddenly, it rocked to clock in at 80,000 in 2020. The project is that there will be a soar to reach a ceiling of 90,000 in 2024.
In relation to the bar chart, in general, the overall figures for Asia outperformed those for the remaining countries. In detail, Asia had 40% in 2020, it is predicted that the percentage will increase gradually to over 50% in 2024. Similarly, Europe is predicted to rise slightly from 30% to 35% in 2024. By contrast, the prediction is that there will be a modest fall from 15% to 8% in Africa and from 10% to 8% in America during the 14 year period.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ver a 14 year period starting in 2020. In terms of the line graph, overall, the...
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... to reach a ceiling of 90,000 in 2024. In relation to the bar chart, in general...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
similarly, so, then, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51826957109 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554285714286 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3857842375 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22054165928 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691162646267 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683586533436 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135345228498 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474096869635 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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