People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
In recent years, we have seen a massive rise in the number of people sleeping less than they used to in the past. This essay will analyze the culprits and impacts on them and others.
There are a host of reasons why people spend less time sleeping. Firstly, a hectic working schedule leads to having less time to sleep. In other words, many adults tend to work at the office until evening or multitask at the same time so that they hardly have enough time to sleep. take young people as an example. Nowadays, the young get many jobs at the same time not only for guaranteeing a high income but also gaining much more experiences for their job opportunity in the future that leads to the shortage of sleeping. Secondly, stressure from study and work results in the inability to fall asleep. to be more precise, they face a large amount of homework and extra work that takes all their sleeping time. It is, therefore, understandable why this situation takes place.
There are several impacts from this trend, and they all tend to be detrimental. To begin with, it is undoubted that lack of sleep is associated with health-related problems. This is mainly because if people do not sleep enough eight hours per day, they are badly affected by serious diseases such as heart complaints, neurological condition, even depression. Needless to say, they leave terrible complex after-effects that people have to endure during their lives. Secondly, there is a clear connection between having less time for sleeping and failure. Specifically, a shortage of sleep makes people have no ability to concentrate on work, study or other activities. This usually leads to frustration and being low-spirited.
In conclusion, it is crystal clear that people are having less and less time for sleeping because of hectic lifestyle and working pressure, and the serious impact on health and quality of work. It is imperative that people should manage their work to spend enough time sleeping.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93093093093 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62587843967 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537537537538 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1172874979 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4210526316 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240624420024 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828634395595 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614075149905 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177862919892 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654163198668 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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