The line graph shows the number of cell phone subscribers in a particular city, by gender. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparison where relevant
The line chart illustrates how many men and women in Maryvisille register to use mobile phone from 1995 to 2015. Overall, the number of users of each gender rose at nearly similar rates during the ten-year period but there is difference from the year 2005 to 2015.
To commence with, during the first stage from 1995 to 2005, for both genders, the number of subcribers increased significantly. In 1995, there were only around 500 people owning mobile phone by each gender.Then the number continuously rose until it reached the number of 2500 users by each gender in the year 2005.
Following that, in the period from 2005 to 2010, there was no change in the number of male users whilst there was a slight drop in female subscriber amount to about 2250 users. However, from the year 2010 to 2015, while the number of men using mobile phone increased slightly to 2750, the number of female users still stayed steady.
Generally, while the numbers of both male anf female subcribers rose considerably, they rose more for men.
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- The line graph shows the number of cell phone subscribers in a particular city by gender Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make the comparison where relevant
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...ople owning mobile phone by each gender.Then the number continuously rose until it r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83050847458 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36742714563 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5642848212 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114686935556 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594023097571 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283746417358 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722894627842 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275040607397 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.