The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005.
The line chart illustrates the changing patterns in crimes including car theft, house burgling and street robbery in a part of Great Britain over the course of 35 years starting in 1970.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that all lines experienced an upward trend. Throughout the period, the highest quantity of crimes in England and Wales was registered by the figure of car theft , which was about one million people in 2005.
In 1970, the number of car theft was the highest (0.4 million), which was twice as the figure of house burgling and approximately eight times as the one of street robbery. A relatively consistent increase was seen in between 1970 and 1990, and the change in houseburgling mirrored that of car theft. In the last 25-year period, the figure of car theft remained constant after jumping to 1.6 million in 1995, whereas the number of house burgling witnessed a progressive decline to 0.5 million.
The remainder line of street robbery didn’t alter in the period of 1970 – 1995, before rising slightly to 0.2 million in the end.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...as registered by the figure of car theft , which was about one million people in 2...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ar theft remained constant after jumping to 1.6 million in 1995, whereas the numb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88524590164 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58729902738 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4407792117 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.714285714 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162808371974 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797324102862 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514102930953 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113266516088 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640571948138 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.