The information about the total expenses and resources of fish imported to the US from 1988 to 2000 is depicted by the rendered pie chart.The data has been calibrated in billions of dollars.
To begin with,Referring to the total value, a considerable incline was seen throughout the span,from 6.57 billions of dollars in 1988 to 10.72 billions of dollars in 2000. Regarding to the sources,In 1988 Canada was tops the list in imported fish to the US,it accounted for 60 %.Meanwhile,China and other countries were imported 13% and 27% respectively.
Moving further,a dramatic escalated was observed in other countries,who imported fish approximately a half in 1992,whereas Canada was highly fall and reached up to 34% and China was slightly increased,it comprised to 20%,until 1992. In 2008, other nations were a significant source of imported fish to the US up to 42%,while Canada was slightly decreased and stood at nearly a quarter.There had been a slight increase was manifested in China,who imported fish to the US around a third in 2000.
Overall,it can be vividly manifested that value of fish imported to the US was increased throughout the span.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, third, whereas, while, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18085106383 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18859798103 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547872340426 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6923007996 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.333333333 112.824112599 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.23603664747 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311588160788 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170357551387 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112531083056 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216359834856 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105511256824 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.