The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999 The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999

Essay topics:

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

The given charts detail the trend of visits made by UK residents to foreign land and foreigners visit in Uk over a period of 20 years from 1979 to 1999. Also, a report on favorite destinations chosen by UK residents in 1999 is detailed in the bar chart.

Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that despite a similar trend, the visits by UK residents led the overseas resident visits and grew tremendously over time. Also, Spain and France remained the top choices among all the tourist destinations.

According to the given illustration, 2 million more UK residents went abroad as against 10 million foreign visitors to the UK in 1979. the number rose steadily to 20 million and 12 million respectively in 5 years. After that, between 1984 and 1989, the former climbed higher by 10 million than the latter. In the last decade, visits from the UK skyrocketed to more than 50 million, higher by almost one-quarter than visits to the UK.

On the other hand, during the last year, more than 10 million UK residents chose France as a visitor destination. Followed next by Spain with 9 million visitors. However, the USA, Greece, and Turkey were visited by nearly 4, 3,2 million people respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...on foreign visitors to the UK in 1979. the number rose steadily to 20 million and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70596054602 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583732057416 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1443387426 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335120739511 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128377189027 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128507711971 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221564395954 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127019366228 0.0819641961636 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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