The line graphs below show the production and demand for steel in million tones in the steel industry in the UK in 2010
The graph indicates the production and demand for steel in million tonnes in the steel industry in the UK in 2010.
In January production of steel increased steadily, while demand for steel rose slightlyier than the amount produced. Despite the amount of production showed a slight fall, then the production of steel levelled out between April and August. In contrast, demand for steel did not keep stability and there were fluctuations form the beginning of April to late august. It showed even zero in early december. By the end of 2010, while the amount of production had decreased by less than 1000 tonnes, demand had increased too 2000 tonnes which reached the beginning of the year if the year.
In the middle of the december finally demand for steel execed from the amount of production.
All in all, the graph also shows that production for steel nearly outnumbered two times than demand for steel throughout 2010 In the UK.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
... the production and demand for steel in million tonnes in the steel industry in the UK ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92452830189 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50078900567 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534591194969 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5091655466 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.875 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.533098093938 0.215688989381 247% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.260158855341 0.103423049105 252% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192003475433 0.0843802449381 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.400606591999 0.15604864568 257% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1803449115 0.0819641961636 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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