The line graphs show the production and demand for steel in million tonnes and the number of workers employed in the steel industry in the UK in 2010

Essay topics:

The line graphs show the production and demand for steel in million tonnes and the number of workers employed in the steel industry in the UK in 2010.

The line graphs illustrate how much steel was manufactured and requested and how many employees having a position in the steel industry in the UK in 2010.

Overall, the amount of steel produced in the UK was generally higher than its requirement except for December. In addition, there was a decline in the number of workers taken on by steel industry.

The production of steel started at 4000 million tonnes, after which it rocketed to peak at about 5000 million tonnes in February before falling back to 4000 million tonnes and leveling off until July. Meanwhile, about 2000 million tonnes steel was produced in January, with a rapid jump to hit the highest point of 3000 million in March and some subsequent fluctuations to 2000 million in July. From July to December, there was a drop in the output of steel to north of 3000 millions in August, followed by a quick growth to shy of 5000 millions before bottoming out at 8000 million at the end of the year. Similar changes, but to a lesser extent, was seen in the figure for steel demand, which grew to 2500 million in August and considerably decreased to hit a trough of 0 million in November. The requirement of steel then rose again and ended the period at 2000 millions, the same amount as in January.

The number of people hired by UK steel industry was 5000 in January and it increased to reach a high of 5500 in the next month, followed by a rapid fall to 3000 in March. Between March and July, the volume of workers ranged from 2500 to 3000 people and this figure then climbed to about 3500 in August before gradually decreasing to hit a low of 1000 when the year ended.

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, while, except for, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 33.7804878049 219% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 296.0 196.424390244 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56081081081 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42870397432 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489864864865 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.8252262107 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376036739357 0.215688989381 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153946896841 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702951741237 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222295823782 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662762186576 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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