he line graphs below show the production and demand for steel in million tonnes and the number of workers employed in the steel industry in the UK in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pictures below illustrates production and the demand for steel in million tons and the number of staff involved in the steel industry in the UK in 2010
Overall, the amount of produced steel was higher than the actual demand, which witnessed a converse trend in December. It is also noticeable that the number of workers employed in this major was the highest in February, which declined significantly in December.
Regarding the amount of manufactured steel in January of 2010, it began at 4,000 million tons which is double the actual demand. The steel production and demand in April remained almost the same in April. In August,the demand remained unchanged but the product dropped to just over 3,000 million tons. The demand in November declined significantly and then went higher than the demand for steel at the end of the year, with the figure being recorded at 2,000 million tons and about below 1,000 million tons.
In terms of the number of workers employed in this sector in 2010, it was at about 5,000 in the first month, which increased to approximately 5,500 in February. After two months of rising, it dropped significantly to 3,000 in March and remained unchanged until May. From May to August, the number of staff in the steel sector fluctuated between 3,000 and 3,500, then it dipped consistently and finally reached a bottom at 1,000 in the last month of 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91139240506 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5555691016 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476793248945 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9427985193 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261246636095 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119211160974 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795249442925 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195285311058 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11604022548 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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