the map below illustrate a beachfront area in Australia between 1950 and today.
The map shows the difference in a front area of a beach in Australia between 1950 and now.
Overall, the main change was the extension of the road and the newly built surf club and a restaurant.
As is observed in the first map, there was a road coming from the city and reached up to a car park on the eastern side of the beach. Whereas now they extended the road towards the beachside over the car parking area. Similarly, the west side swimming pool was also expanded from 25m to 50m.
IN 1950, there was a playground on the west side which was replaced with a new car park recently. In addition, besides the beach near the extended pool a new restaurant was also built as well as either side of the beach, there were two surf club introduced in Australia. While the four dining tables and pavilion beside the road were kept in the same place without any changes. Likewise, they did not change the light house position and size after the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...each in Australia between 1950 and now. Overall, the main change was the extensi...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... park on the eastern side of the beach. Whereas now they extended the road towards the ...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...swimming pool was also expanded from 25m to 50m. IN 1950, there was a playgro...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion, besides the beach near the extended pool a new restaurant was also built as ...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...new restaurant was also built as well as either side of the beach, there were two...
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Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'club' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'clubs'.
Suggestion: clubs
... side of the beach, there were two surf club introduced in Australia. While the four...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, likewise, similarly, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42372881356 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22793800336 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570621468927 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3863157874 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 5.23603664747 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119491398611 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602441320563 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108501311294 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113527327287 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144132149057 0.0819641961636 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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