the chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism related industries in one UK cities between 1989 and 2009.
The bar graph illustrates the details of available jobs in restaurants, hotels, sports and leisure, travel and tours industries in UK cities from 1989 to 2009.
Overall, the majority of vacancies listed in restaurants over the years and the highest number of jobs recorded in all four industries in 1999 which is over 900 numbers.
Regarding restaurant and hotels accounts for about 1100 numbers in 1989 which climbed to 1600 in 2004 which is the maximum among other industries. After five years the job number decreased to just over 1300 at the end of the period. Similarly, employment numbers in hotels were just above 1000 at the beginning later which increased to 1400 in 1994. However, in the following years, the numbers declined and reached the starting number in 2009 too.
In terms of sports and leisure has around 900 numbers in 1989 which declined to below 700 in the next year. While the data go up to above 1000 in 1999 which is the highest number compared to other years and plummeted to approximately 700 in the final year. Moreover, travel and tour industries reached the peak in 1994 in contrast to below 800 number oin 1989. For the consecutive years, the graph goes down and finished at below 400 number in 2009.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... is the maximum among other industries. After five years the job number decreased to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, regarding, similarly, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79906542056 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47309304047 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518691588785 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2453415094 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.7 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259033407201 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112029807482 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601145133123 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166124444397 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531954495475 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.