The map below shows the changes in an American town between 1948 and 2010.
The provided map illustrates the alternations that happened to an American town in 1948 and 2010.
It is clear that despite some general changes like the relocation of buildings or the establishment of new facilities, its main structure remained almost the same facilities in the years 1948 and 2010..
As is observed, American town had lots of amenities in 1948, namely a petrol station, a local supermarket, residential houses, a canal, a church, a swimming pool, and factories. A local supermarket was established in the west, which was close to the canal. The church was located in the southern part of the American town. There were residential houses that had been built in the east and central parts of the town. Additionally, the swimming pool was constructed in the northern part of the town, where factories had been developed in the last in 1948.
On the other hand, in the year 2010, petrol stations remained stable in the north area. On the opposite side, the local supermarket was replaced by commercial buildings, whereas the church had been changed by a sports stadium in the west and south areas. The central residential houses were changed, and it was replaced by buildings and structures, while there was no change in the eastern residential houses. Factories were demolished and the airport was reestablished in that place. The swimming pool on the northern side was also replaced by supermarket and commercial buildings over the period of 62 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...me facilities in the years 1948 and 2010.. As is observed, American town had lo...
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Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...hereas the church had been changed by a sports stadium in the west and south areas. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06557377049 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86870023015 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520491803279 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.63643992 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208190811935 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903566817818 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113017458694 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183830054236 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146604195873 0.0819641961636 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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