The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Essay topics:

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

The maps show the changes taken place in the Ryemouth village since 1995 and present.

It is clear from the map that, the entire area is divided into three areas by the main road. In 1995,there was a farmland and forest park which is converted into golf and tennis playground. Further, in the south-west side of the village the area of the shop is taken up by the restaurant.

In addition to this, fishing port is removed now and the apartments are occupied the place of fish market. Furthermore, car park is added nearby the hotel in north-east direction. Moreover, there was a small housing area in the north-west side and it is converted into big housing area.

To sum up, there are a lot of changes are witnessed in now like as, golf and tennis playground, apartments as well as restaurant.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mall housing area in the north-west side and it is converted into big housing are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, well, in addition, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 662.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66197183099 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5982766327 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.7752773351 43.030603864 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.75 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150603333072 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775859881156 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148747995772 0.0843802449381 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138250361657 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192525542209 0.0819641961636 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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