The map below shows the outline of the village of Chorleywood in the period from 1868 to 1994.
The map below shows the outline of the village of Chorleywood in the period from 1868 to 1994.
Overall, it is clear that there are four different types of area were built over the period, and the village was constructed with three types of transportation.
From 1868 to 1883, Park and Golf course were built in the central of the village, and the main roads also were constructed in the north and the west of Chorleywood. The village Station was added in the southwest of the center from 1883 to 1922 when the Railway, which went across the Station and the western main road, was built in the south in 1909.
Two areas were built on each side of the Station from 1922 to 1970. In 1970, the Motorway, which went across the northern main road and southern railway, was added in the east of the village. Besides, five areas had been constructed both sides of the motorway with two areas in the north and the last three in the south from 1970 to 1994.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47428571429 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22735497936 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7867008556 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298452140803 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199494718305 0.103423049105 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.328506589661 0.0843802449381 389% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316939102993 0.15604864568 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.394948125016 0.0819641961636 482% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.94 61.2550243902 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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