There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music?
Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Nowadays, the world has the majority of types of music. While there are some several reasons why music is very important to us, the modern worldwide music, in my opinion, can not overcome the role of traditional music.
We can not refuse the role of the music that affects the social life of the human. Firstly, music will help us to reduce stress effectively if we have to deal with lots of workloads every day in our life. Secondly, it can strengthen the connection between human together because we will understand clearly and know deeply about people and the culture of a nation when we listen to the traditional music of this country. Finally, music is the landmark in history that reminds us of some unforgettable times in the past. For example, the song ” When Johnny comes marching home”, in 1863, in the United States, will remind Americans about the victory in the Civil war-time.
Although modern music is becoming more and more popular all around the world, I think that traditional music always has an irreplaceable role in our life. Traditional music is the special characteristics of a nation, and they are the tool to identify the culture of one country. Because each nation has its own wartime, and the music in this time emphasize some history invents that separate one nation with others. Besides, traditional songs also behalf of the belief of people in their own ancestors. For example, the hymn ”Sunny Day” is the trust of the Vietnam community in the creation of the country.
In conclusion, in my viewpoint, music has a crucial role in our lives today, and traditional music can never be replaced by nowadays international music.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92605633803 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68745487545 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5834664793 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42292670806 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169377598805 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12680826637 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315258282654 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993232214814 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.