The map show the change of Pentland from 1980 to 2007

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The map show the change of Pentland from 1980 to 2007

A glance at the two maps given is an illustration regarding the transformation of Pentland between two different years 1980 - 2007.
What stands out from the chart, there were radical changes encompassing a dramatic increase in residential areas, amenities, and the erection of infrastructure.

In more detail, in the north, the sea was converted into the yacht marina alongside the emergence of the new road. In addition, more apartments have been built in the northeast. Besides, a car park situated in the east in 1980 was relocated and reconstructed to a multi-story car park to the west in 2007 and replaced with an industrial area. Then, a new park, and swimming pool were erected near that.

Another prominent feature of Pentland in 2007, there was major shops opened along the path in many ways. In the east-south, more branch roads were erected and two arrays of houses were built facingly with each other. Moreover, the cinema was established opposite the suburb.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve been built in the northeast. Besides, a car park situated in the east in 1980 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09937888199 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87066240384 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645962732919 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9472577839 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188774465745 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597158680894 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758568493697 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112909586825 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680443114674 0.0819641961636 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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