The changes in some areas before and after renovate over two decades between 1990 and 2012, revealing in the maps.
Obviously, the designers just replaced the function those facilities, while the biggest changes were showed in eastern region. Also, they added a flat in the north-east region.
When it came to the eastern area, the houses were replaced by the designers, becoming the blocks of apartments. Following this, located in south-east were the cinema and supermarket substituting the theater and shops, and also in the centre area, the cafe and park were re-functioned to be Hotel and Golf course areas. However, there was an addition of Flats, and it could bee seen in the north-east region.
On the other hands, the planners changed the bank where located in the north-west map, and this became restaurant. In south-west region, the trees catted down by the developers, and then they established Techno park. Albeit they built and re-functioned those buildings, the school and library were no changed in the western region, and also high way experienced with those ones.
- the map below show the village of stokeford in1930 and 2010 summarise the information and make comparison where relevant 67
- The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012 84
- Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects Discuss both views and give your opinion 66
- Many teenagers now have the their own smartphone what are the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your opinion 84
- The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the north-east region. When it came to the eastern area, the houses were rep...
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Line 7, column 368, Rule ID: THESE_ONES[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'those' instead.
Suggestion: those
...ion, and also high way experienced with those ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16384180791 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64827758931 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621468926554 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.721297519 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.555555556 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0886199655543 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381735837709 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533440524427 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066615328862 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580323502535 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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