The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are two maps delineating the reorganization in the layout of an undetermined bookshop in 2000 and at the present.
It is conspicuous that the interior architecture of the bookshop has undergone various alterations, including the unification of particular book sections and the addition of new customer services.
According to the horizontal, the new books and travel section remained their locations right after the entrance. Similarly, the service desk is still located in its former position on the right-hand corner of the area, after the main entrance.
When it comes to the remaining sections of the store, there was a rearrangement in the organization of bookcases. In 2000, the fiction genre was favored in the amount of space displayed in the store with a long shelf leaned against the left wall and a shelf right next to the prior one, which formed a huge L-shape. However, the long shelf of fiction now shares the analogous room with the cookery, hobbies and arts that transferred from the middle of the room to make way for three sets of tables and chairs. The old non-fiction department has been turned into a new café. In the interim, the area for fiction books in the back left corner of the store is now used for non-fiction books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...aining sections of the store, there was a reassemble in the organization of bookcases. In 20...
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Line 4, column 586, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... turned into a new cafe. In the interim, the area for fiction books in the back l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92018779343 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77859715923 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2106182218 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.444444444 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0602730392267 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0230511233933 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248362231033 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0345650815289 0.15604864568 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275044536619 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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