The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now and the plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate Islip town centre in the current and plans for the future.
Overall, it is clear that the facilities in Islip town have changed and planned in the future
In Islip town Centre now, there are many shops are built around main road the north and south of main road. Housing is built in the south of shops. A park located in the east of housing and school located in the west of this.
In Islip town centre in the future, it is predicted that many facilities will be built. Facilities will be located in Dual carriageway. New housing is built near Dual carriageway. Bus station is located near shopping center and car park and opposite pedestrians only. There are 2 housing, one located in dual dual carriageway and others located out of this.

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