The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps illustrate how currently the centre of a town named Islip is and its changes in the future.
Overall, except school in the south of the map and the blocks of shops bellow the main road, other constructions will be replaced according to the planned development. Besides, a road called Dual carriageway will appear and cover most of buildings in this centre.
At first glance, it is clear that there will be a construction of Dual carriageway which will limit nearly all of infrastructure in the centre from school and housing in the bottom of the map. Next, the lots of shop above the main road will be demolished to make way for new bus station, shopping centre, car parking and new housing in the future while the main road will be broadened and used by walking people only.
In the future, it is expected that the shops bellow the map will remain, although they will be also moved in the southern direction a little bit. In addition, the current housing in the central town is expected to relocate to the left and an another new housing will appear too. Moreover, the park on the east of the town will be planned to become smaller while the housing beside the Dual carriageway will be removed to the right of the map.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the buildings') or simply say ''most buildings''.
Suggestion: most of the buildings; most buildings
... Dual carriageway will appear and cover most of buildings in this centre. At first glance, it ...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... also moved in the southern direction a little bit. In addition, the current housing in th...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a new' or 'another new'.
Suggestion: a new; another new
...is expected to relocate to the left and an another new housing will appear too. Moreover, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, moreover, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58558558559 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45627289196 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518018018018 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.1270896126 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1486414162 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835364414504 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753258505908 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126525102696 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836495523669 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.