The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The information showed by the picture is the planning description of small town centre, its name is Islip as the present which will growth. It is seem from the maps that will huge change, base on the planning, start from facilities until the infrastructure. It will different form todays and development plan.
On the first map describe that the just one the main road with straight pattern where between both of road sides there are shops crosswise regularly. While that, in the south-eastern of road there is park beside housing is site in the centre of town then in other side of housing, south-western there is school.
The second map is planning description of Islip town, where the form of road around the city (dual carriageway) with the facilities stand in the road centre. The position of shops such as before but the different just one line and as diameter of road with in northern are pedestrians only then above it there is bus station, shopping centre, car park and new housing in the north-eastern. After than below of shops in southern there is housing, new housing and the park beside the road. Finally, the school that is located across the way.
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...as the present which will growth. It is seem from the maps that will huge change, ba...
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...cture. It will different form todays and development plan. On the first map des...
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...ark beside housing is site in the centre of town then in other side of housing, ...
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...e housing is site in the centre of town then in other side of housing, south-wes...
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...and as diameter of road with in northern are pedestrians only then above it there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76732673267 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59578300384 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534653465347 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6568889183 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175758736053 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735714061184 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822617081159 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120386790945 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635848147066 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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