The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now and plans for its development.

Essay topics:

The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now and plans for its development.

The maps illustrate the information about the centre of a small town called Islip as it is in present as well as depict the plans for the future.
it is clear from the graph that in the north direction countryside will be replaced by dual carriageway. Bus station and car park will be constructed in place of shops in the north direction as well as shopping centre. Moreover, new houses will be built with modern facilities and in place of main road, pedistrians path will be renovated. shops will be shifted in the middle of the town. Apart from this, in the east direction, new housing along with nearby park will be built. Outside the centre, in the south side of town, there will be space for housing and school will remain at same place with no changes.
From the overall analysis, it is manifest that villages would totally be changed into modern urban area.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, apart from, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5935483871 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38819503942 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587096774194 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6063285317 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113579550531 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664123732941 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130728583972 0.0843802449381 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144923561276 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184297614458 0.0819641961636 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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