The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the future changes of Islip and its development plan.
Overall, the main road will replace and due to this several changes will be happened to depict the new face of the city.
Firstly, the main difference is relocation of main road. this road will be for pedestrian and a dual carriageway will construct around the town instead of older one. At the north of main road there were shops which some parts will destroy to construct bus station and car park on the east and west of shops. On the northeastern of Islip, a new housing section will build.
On the south of city there were park and school which remain at the same place while new residence building will add at the east of park. Moreover, the new road makes the park smaller than previous and separate it from southern residents of the town. The school will locate at the south of new road at the southwest of city.
- The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are actually important for a country. 89
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons when needed. 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... difference is relocation of main road. this road will be for pedestrian and a dual ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58282208589 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27634645232 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539877300613 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5302925867 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0906497369521 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528005500476 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523243825233 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778057103699 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063184429649 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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