The given three maps demonstrate the Meadowside village and Fonton , which is a neighbor town where the alterations have taken place during the year 1962, 1985, and present.
Starting with 1962, the meadowside and fonton both were separated from each other. The meadowside had only road passing from it, and the fonton had a railway track, whilst after 23 years some variations took place, the road was increased in size passing through it as well as combined with the font on town. Besides this, housing estate, leisure complex and superstore had been constructed.
In the present time, the meadowside and fonton have been joined together, the empty area was used to build a business park and hotel. Apart from this, a railway station has connected next to the old road with a new line.
Overall, according to the requirements, the variations took place in the meadowside and fonton over the time period of past and present.
- Nowadays people mostly use cars rather than bicycles as a transportation preference What effects are caused by this trend What can be done to encourage the public to use bicycles 86
- The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
- Some people think that uniform at school is unnecessary and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree Give your opinion and examples from your own experience 78
- Today more people are overweight than ever before.What in your opinion are the primary causes of this?What are the main effects of this epidemic? 61
- Many people believe that social networking sites (such as facebook ) have a huge negative impact on society.To what extend do you agree or disagree ? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96153846154 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49419790018 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621794871795 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2507122087 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29079434316 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128608462409 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104831612878 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183554217937 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100195868956 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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