People are divided into two main camps on the issue of punishing crimes. Some of them consider that each offender has different motives and all circumstances should be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. In this essay, I am going to consider both views and express personal opinion.
On one side of the argument there are people who believe that adopting fixed punishments will be more beneficial for society. The reason is that criminals will think twice before committing a crime. Also, there are some examples of successful experience about declining crime rate in countries like China, adopted strict laws. Moreover, plenty of time and resources could probably be saved and directed in much needed sectors of community such as education and medicine.
On the other hand, in many countries there may be strong factors influencing crime rates such as poverty. For this reason, it is crucial to consider all the circumstances surrounding an offender.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...oing to consider both views and express personal opinion. On one side of the argument there ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 157.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19108280255 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68794336908 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.713375796178 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1977146434 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.5555555556 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357549366117 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117963802928 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097097021916 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206750754207 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431096796919 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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