The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
Given are the two maps delineating the transformations of the seafront in Darwin town during the course of time, commencing from 2009 to 2014.
Perceptibly, throughout the period mentioned, this region experienced drastic modifications mainly in the south with the elimination of industrial areas alongside the addition of a handful of amenities.
When it comes to the northern part of the map, there was a footpath ringing the lake and the industrial area which was thereafter demolished to give way to the swimming pool. Conversely, the convention center and the school respectively to the northwest and the west of the lake plateaued during the years. The similar pattern was recorded with the fishing area to the northeast and the two swimming pools along the coastline to the east of the lake.
Moving south, by far the most striking alteration was the removal of the industrial area to make way for the appearance of a new western university building and the doubled extension of central residential buildings. Likewise, there was a footpath with a large number of trees planted at each side leading to the newly-added harbour in the southeast of the area after five years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the two maps delineating the transforma...
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Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...rmations of the seafront in Darwin town during the course of time, commencing from 2009 to 2014. Pe...
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Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...gs. Likewise, there was a footpath with a large number of trees planted at each side leading to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, likewise, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9323559426 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579487179487 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.753408311 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.142857143 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127419035942 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576381888849 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589203855902 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833474326866 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649619360989 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.