The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam
The maps provides the information about the differences in a city after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.
In 1990, in the north-west side there were a forest and a building constructed in an ancient times, which was an ancient structure. In the south-west side, the rare plants and animals were living there and the beautiful mountains. An elongated river divide the village in the two parts. And in the north-east side, the area was covered with mountains. Alongside the river, a small space was covered with irrigated farmlands and aside that villages were settled there. After that in the east-south side, the edge was covered with mountains.
After 20 years, the north side was covered with mountains. Following this, there was a small lake made in the center of the village with boat and fishes. Along with that, the hotel was constructed. Consequently, the river was shorten and hydroelectric dam was installed. At the both side of the river, electricity was generated and villages situated at the right side.
Overall, the principal change to the village was the hydroelectric dam around the the center. Various other developments with the regard to ancient structure, forest and rare plants and animals will accompany the building of hotel and electricity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'provide'.
Suggestion: provide
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'shortened'.
Suggestion: shortened
...onstructed. Consequently, the river was shorten and hydroelectric dam was installed. At...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...illage was the hydroelectric dam around the the center. Various other developments with...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...illage was the hydroelectric dam around the the center. Various other developments with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16267942584 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84502773721 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478468899522 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4908818756 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0714285714 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130722436197 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611251903883 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109269563888 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148682895876 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14999447293 0.0819641961636 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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