The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton at the present and its development plan in the future.
In general, this place will witness dramatic changes. In the forthcoming future, it will become a residential area instead of an industrial one.
Looking into details, there will be more lanes, which will be connected with the big roundabout. Besides, in the south, a smaller roundabout will be constructed in the middle of the road; meanwhile, in the north, there will be a lane leading to the housing area, which is now farmland. As a result, the farmland will be moved to the northeast of the map.
Another worth-noticing point is that all the factories in this area will be replaced by housing and accommodations for local people. Furthermore, some services such as shops, medical centers, playgrounds and schools will be erected so as to provide more convenience for the citizens. This means this industrial area in Norbiton will be urbanized and transformed into a city. Nevertheless, the nearby town will still remain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 232, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...playgrounds and schools will be erected so as to provide more convenience for the citize...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, look, nevertheless, so, still, while, as to, in general, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0701754386 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97150840144 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590643274854 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7204985589 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 5.23603664747 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112571472385 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630726566857 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818097766945 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112527705336 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997213294361 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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