The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned
future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
The maps show that an industrial area in the town of Norbiton has changes considerably.
In general, there are eight factories in Norbiton industrial area at the moment that in the future will be alternatives with housing, shops, and school.
As can be seen, there is a bridge that people can access to the other side of the river in Farmland
And at the end of the pass there is a house. It is evident that one of the factories that was placed at the end of the pass alternative with the school in the development scheme and will locate a playground between to new housing in the east of Norbiton near the school. Creating a new road toward the north-west that end of it is a housing. A new square will be created under the main square and shops and medical center located close to it.
As a result, the planned future development has a very good scheme and add a lot of facilities and a new passway for people who live there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36781609195 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50659059936 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511494252874 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0399493619 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.571428571 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164750396607 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897497425161 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113651294821 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118910851472 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122336639322 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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