It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Taking risks has become an integral part of many people lives. It would be necessary to take risks either in professional or individual life. There are many downsides to taking risks, but I believe that overall, there are lots of beneficial aspects in it.
One of the main reasons why people would be taking risks is that gain an opportunity to promote themselves. It is very important that use this chance excellently. For example, in individual side a person takes risks when getting married. It is a big risk because you share your private life with another and this makes your partner knows most of your secret and help you to solve them. not only would you help in any personal aspects but also, she would promote you in higher level of personal life that you don’t know any thing about them before. In professional aspect taking risks would give you an opportunity to show your ability and career when have decision to win in a construction auction.
In my opinion, people should be taking risks in many parts of their lives but it does not mean they take risks without plan and thought. Before every risk not only have you to know all of the aspects of the subject but also have to consider all the consequences. This approach helps people to select the correct option and less the rate of the failure of risk.
In conclusion, taking risks have a number of disadvantages sides, but overall, it has many advantages in personal and professional lives. I would recommend that everyone take risks at least one in his/her life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 387, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
...your secret and help you to solve them. not only would you help in any personal asp...
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Line 2, column 520, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...el of personal life that you don’t know any thing about them before. In professional aspe...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...re every risk not only have you to know all of the aspects of the subject but also have to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, at least, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69259259259 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4812852327 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525925925926 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5939271537 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409314437886 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149911868719 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859052426187 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261610039671 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311377146337 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.