The maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
The given map shows the information island before construction some tourist facilities It is crystal representation
It can be seen that make that construction In island ,There were no accommodation facilities of town ,no footpath, no vehicle track no restaurant ,No pier facilities was available due to their, and there were no tourist
On the other hand , After construction there are many facilities for tourist Now ,In beach ,swimming facility and sea place near provide six accommodation, there are provide accommodation centre footpath another south side sea Above pier. next vehicle track over all crose to reception area. this is reception area frunt provide one restaurant as well as more provide nine accommodation. Furthermore increased only one Tree respectively
Overall ,it is evident that before place no tourist facilities. Only trees and beach place but after time provide also facilities and right side increase one Tree
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... facilities It is crystal representation It can be seen that make that constructi...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...en that make that construction In island ,There were no accommodation facilities o...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...were no accommodation facilities of town ,no footpath, no vehicle track no restaur...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...footpath, no vehicle track no restaurant ,No pier facilities was available due to ...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... due to their, and there were no tourist On the other hand , After construction t...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re were no tourist On the other hand , After construction there are many facil...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...here are many facilities for tourist Now ,In beach ,swimming facility and sea plac...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...any facilities for tourist Now ,In beach ,swimming facility and sea place near pro...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...ar provide six accommodation, there are provide accommodation centre footpath another s...
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Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Next
...path another south side sea Above pier. next vehicle track over all crose to recepti...
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Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'tracks'.
Suggestion: tracks
...south side sea Above pier. next vehicle track over all crose to reception area. this ...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...track over all crose to reception area. this is reception area frunt provide one res...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ell as more provide nine accommodation. Furthermore increased only one Tree respectively ...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore increased only one Tree respectively Overall ,it is evident that before place...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d only one Tree respectively Overall ,it is evident that before place no touri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01263017649 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657534246575 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.819715903 43.030603864 460% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.6 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 5.23603664747 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278188881568 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991444871681 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118994806969 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220313371925 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183776400476 0.0819641961636 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 61.2550243902 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.3012195122 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.4329268293 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.