the maps below show the xentre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development
The maps illustrate the current Islip town with its proposed changes in the future
As can be seen from the plans, the Islip town centre will undergo significant changes in regard to the road, shops, housing areas and other amenities.
Looking at the map as it is now, there is a main road running across this town center from west to east. In the second map, the central area will be pedestrianized and the traffic will be diverted to a dual carriageway that form a circular shape around this area. Currently, there are 2 rows of shops on either side of the main road. However, it seems that the row on the north side of the main road will be demolished to make way for the bus station, shopping centre, car park and now housing respectively from West to East. Even though the row of shops on the south side of the main road remains intact, the town's park will subtantially reduce in size to make way for housing and new housing area. Last but not least, the school and a housing area still exist outside the circular area but there is a slight extension of the former and a negligible relocation of the later.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ops, housing areas and other amenities. Looking at the map as it is now, there i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, second, so, still, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45365853659 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34131097065 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546341463415 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4420617227 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.428571429 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13086035702 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630663121482 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584745493177 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122621751793 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658037004289 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.