The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The two maps illustrate the current industrial area in Norbiton and the development plan in this region.
Overall, it is noticeable that all the factories in Norbiton will be demolished and converted into residential areas. Furthermore, some basic facilities such as shops, a medical care center, a playground, and a school will be constructed.
On the current map, there is a roundabout located in the center of Norbiton’s industrial area, and a small road runs from that roundabout to the east of Norbiton. Eight plants stretch from the left side of a roundabout to the end of a small road. On the northern side, there is a river that flows through the region. Above that, there is farmland which has not been untapped yet.
In the future development plan, the roundabout and a small road will remain the same. However, eight factories surround the first roundabout and a small road will be changed into new housing. Additionally, on the eastern side of Norbiton, a medical care center, a playground, and a new school will be built. The plans will expand into the west of Norbiton, with a new street on the northwest of the roundabout. A new residential area and a mall will be situated on either side of the new road. There are also plans for a small roundabout to be built on the center of the main road, linking to the road that has the first roundabout. On the northern side, there will be a bridge across the river to the farmland in the north. On the farmland, a new housing area will be constructed. However, the remaining patch will remain undisturbed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ton’s industrial area, and a small road runs from that roundabout to the east of Nor...
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Suggestion:
...onally, on the eastern side of Norbiton, a medical care center, a playground, an...
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...ide of Norbiton, a medical care center, a playground, and a new school will be b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 274.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75182481752 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80214975739 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430656934307 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4353104281 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.375 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120573817982 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520383778319 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073022629853 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112562768092 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983985262648 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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