The maps show the development of the seaside resort of Templeton over the span of 15 years from 1990 to 2005.
The maps show the development of the seaside resort of Templeton over the span of 15 years from 1990 to 2005.
The transformation of the town has resulted in improved social and transport infrastructure, but on the other hand, these changes have made the area a more industrial zone, while earlier it used to be green and quiet.
Out of many changes that occurred in town, those that were concerned with transport infrastructure were the most significant. Along with the construction of a ferry on the eastern bank of a river, the airport was built in the north. The railway line that used to be the only interstate link was extended south-west. With the rise in passenger number, the town also had to build a new parking slot next to the station.
Changes in social infrastructure were not less significant. The industrial area and housing stock were divided in such a way that houses were mostly moved to the western bank of the river. The increase in the number of citizens led to the reconstruction of residential area. Instead of individual cottages more apartment houses were built, though part of cottages were left near the lake. To face the needs of local people the supermarket was settled in the central part of the living area.
- It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject 60
- The diagram shows the manufacturing process of bricks Describe the process 78
- it s better to get a job straight after school What are the advantages and disadvantages 11
- The internet means that people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Learning about the past has no value for those living in the present 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 491, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in the central part of the living area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79069767442 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79695422693 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572093023256 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3438121981 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6363636364 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163369752811 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909090909091 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.287479787288 0.0843802449381 341% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.433012701892 0.0819641961636 528% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.