the maps show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future
The given maps compare the industrial sector will change into a housing area in the years to come
Looking at the maps, it can be seen clearly that the industrial area underwent a lot of significant developmemts
When it comes to the present map, there were main roads around the industrial sector. In addition, the factory was located on the right of industrial area. Furthermore, there were entrance and reception in the north of industrial sector. Moreover, the packing was located on the left those and the storage was located opposite packing. Finally, there were five offices in the South of industrial area and the canteen was connected to the office.
In term of the future map, the packing and storage will be rebuilt into bedroom house with 7 rooms. Additionally, offices and canteen will be narrowed and rescontructed into parking garages. Furthermore, entrance and reception are going to be widened and will be rebuilt into bedroom houses with total 6 rooms connected. And there will be built a communal garden located in front of those bedroom houses. Last but not least, the factory is forecast to be constructed into parking area and apartments.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68617540648 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515463917526 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.9460086106 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37569862417 0.215688989381 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141787314625 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102612943215 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255447482666 0.15604864568 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138895276668 0.0819641961636 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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