More and more people ore using the internet to do their tasks rather then doing in person. (e.g. bonking, shopping, hotel booking etc. ). Do the advantages of this trend outweighs the disadvantages?
The rise and adaption of Technology is increasing significantly. The usage of internet have made the life of public easier, quicker and comfortable.
These days masses opt to do their task online rather then approaching in person. If I asked, I tend to believe that it has more unproductive
outcomes then being advantageous. This essay will highlight that the disadvantages of this approach surpass the benefits brought by it.
Out of all the reason within my knowledge, the foremost one is, lack of knowledge and understanding in people. Majority of the population are in favor
of using technology but, they are unaware of cyber crime activities. There are several cases in which people face frauds. For an instance, there are
emails sent to the client which state of lottery wining, free cash bonus, gift hamper and in turn the criminal asks for bank details to transfer money.
So in that case host is cheated. The other reason is the recovery of the failed transaction. There are certain ways to do online transaction for booking,
banking but if, the transaction is not reached to the destination and the amount is debited from the account then the process to recover the
amount is tedious.
The other demerit in terms of shopping is receiving defective piece even if the demanded price is paid off. Buying the products or likely material
must be examined and analyzed first. It gives customer satisfaction and also surety of receiving an original item.Furthermore, laziness have affected
almost half of the population. Presently, people choose to work in their comfort zone which makes them inactive.If any shopping or bank inquiry is to be
done, then preferring to walk nearby stores or branch increases the activity level in them. A small walk of mile or half can be productive for good health.
However, I could not underestimate the fruitful outcomes caused due to internet. For an example, if transferring the amount is urgent or required to be
done in limited time then, it can be completed with few taps on smartphones or computers. Bookings can be done by seeing the rooms. Hotel's website have a
facility of virtual tours which is due to enhancement in technology. Shopping can be done online by looking at the products and reading limited reviews.
Hence, to recapitulate and offer my position , only limited, minimal and static amount of transaction should be done online. If there is any risk factor
involved in transaction, then going in person and completing the task is wise decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 7.0 400% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 6.8 279% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 965.302439024 220% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 419.0 196.424390244 213% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05966587112 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 3.73543355544 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8438938845 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 106.607317073 234% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594272076372 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 283.868780488 234% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 8.94146341463 268% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0877191023 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4583333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70833333333 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 3.83414634146 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154717930448 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368606714809 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576239156328 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0466056916787 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681383968819 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 40.7170731707 292% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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