number of car manufacture in 2020 2035 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

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number of car manufacture in 2020 - 2035
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The given line graph illustrates how many cars has been produced and will be manufactured in 4 different countries between 2020 and estimations until 2035
What stands out from the line graph is that while the production of car in China experienced a decline, others countries witnessed a progress. Besides, the car manufacture in Japan is always the highest.
Starting at the highest point in 2020 with roughly 350.000 before, Japan saw a small surge in the first ten years and then it is predicted that this figure will drop to more than one third in 2035. American ranked second in its auto mobile production with 300.000 but then witnessed a dramatic fall until the period of prediction with roughly 10.000.
Finally, all two remaining different countries (The UK and China) in 2020 produced 200.000 and 100.000 respectively. Car manufacture in the UK with a minimal decrease, according to current predictions, will experience a considerable fall to roughly 20 000. In contrast, Chinese car manufacture has relatively progress until overtaking the other three. The estimation for this will reach a peak at around 150.000 at the end of the period.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
...d a decline, others countries witnessed a progress. Besides, the car manufacture in Japan ...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[7]
Message: The proper name in singular (Car) must be used with a third-person verb: 'manufactures'.
Suggestion: manufactures
...d 200.000 and 100.000 respectively. Car manufacture in the UK with a minimal decrease, acco...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'progressed'.
Suggestion: progressed
... Chinese car manufacture has relatively progress until overtaking the other three. The e...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, if, second, then, third, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07368421053 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83011114373 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615789473684 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1774850286 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132310886921 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663677842049 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340158057057 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876574511275 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030432664246 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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