The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
The table gave information about the proportion of townspeople who cycled in 2011 classified into five age groups and two genders.
Overall, it is explicit that the ratio of female cyclists was exceeding that of males in all age groups. Children aged 0 to 9 years old got the lion’s share with over 50 percent in both groups while the lowest proportion belonged to the middle-aged.
In the age group of 0-9, almost half of children rode bicycles with slight differences in the ratio of two genders. However, the number of male cyclists halved in teenagers (10-17) while this figure only decreased insignificantly in the female group, from 52 percent to 42 percent. This declining trend went on in the group of 18-39 in which the rates fell from 42 to 17 percent for women and 24 to 20 percent for men.
Cycling was the least common among the middle-aged group with a modest ratio in the male and female group was 8 and 12 percent respectively. However, it then rose significantly in the older group, reaching 19 percent of women in comparison with 13 percent of men.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...of 18-39 in which the rates fell from 42 to 17 percent for women and 24 to 20 pe...
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Suggestion:
... from 42 to 17 percent for women and 24 to 20 percent for men. Cycling was the...
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...n in comparison with 13 percent of men.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70212765957 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67793661235 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.4409718766 43.030603864 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.5 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173935899252 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877735286105 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676120596369 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121223545217 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531222376223 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.