the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995.

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the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995.

The graph gives information about the number of someland’s people suffering from X disease over a period of 35 years from 1960 to 1995.

Overall, it is clear that the number of people having X disease in someland rose dramatically until the mid seventies, remained stable for 5 years, before dropping to zero in the late 80s.

At the beginning of the period, only 100 people was diagnosed that had X disease. this figure remained stable at this level for 5 years, before reaching a peak of 500 cases in next 10 years. Any changes were not reported in someland about the disease until the late 80s.

Suddenly, the condition in someland with regard to X disease became better, with figures dropping to zero during 10 years. Between 1990 and 1995, someland was free of X disease.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...iod of 35 years from 1960 to 1995. Overall, it is clear that the number of ...
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... dropping to zero in the late 80s. At the beginning of the period, only 100...
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...eople was diagnosed that had X disease. this figure remained stable at this level fo...
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...ut the disease until the late 80s. Suddenly, the condition in someland with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 678.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94890510949 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55951587809 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5235364779 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8571428571 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335659921123 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141440827957 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994622657849 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192120597001 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725464584868 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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