The number of prisoner in thousands in five different countries from 1930 to 1980

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The number of prisoner in thousands in five different countries from 1930 to 1980

The information given in the chart makes comparisons in the number of prisoners in
five different countries from 1930 to 1980.
While the figures for imprisonment fluctuated over the period shown, it is clear that
the United States had the highest number of prisoners overall. Great Britain, on the
other hand, had the lowest number of prisoners for the majority of the period.
As can be seen from the graph, the United States had the highest number of
prisoners in four out of the six years shown on the chart, and in 1980 the figure for
this country peaked at nearly 140,000 prisoners. Canada had the highest figures for
imprisonment in 1930 and 1950, with about 120,000 prisoners in both years.
The figures for New Zealand and Australia fluctuated between 40,000 and 100,000
prisoners, although New Zealand's prison population tended to be the higher of the
two.
In contrast to the figures for the other countries, the number of prisoners in Great
Britain rose steadily between 1930 and 1980, reaching a peak of about 80,000 at the
end of the period.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96685082873 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48932889364 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524861878453 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9726002184 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.428571429 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 3.83414634146 339% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322168239718 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185778932327 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175839739484 0.0843802449381 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139753650662 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171153420494 0.0819641961636 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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