Number of Students in a Kaplan International College in the UK in 2009

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Number of Students in a Kaplan International College in the UK in 2009

The line graph shows the changes in number of a Kaplan International College English students in 2009.

Overall, the student number increased by year-end even though there were fluctuations over the months.

A Kaplan International College in UK started off with about 100 students in January 2009, where it steadily grew twice as much by mid-April. However, after this increase in registrants, it dropped to just about 125 enrolees after a month. Interestingly, it recovered dramatically from mid-May until August, reaching its peak of about 350 students, increasing more than 3 times their first wave of English learners. Unfortunately, by mid-August, there was a sharp decline within a month before it gradually fell to just about 170 in total number of people enrolled.

Taking everything into account, a Kaplan International College in UK had grown considerably from just a hundred English students to 170 students in a year.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34459459459 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04329454856 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662162162162 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6698305484 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425774086396 0.215688989381 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204017515509 0.103423049105 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197336496747 0.0843802449381 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29869985994 0.15604864568 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157349328955 0.0819641961636 192% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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