Overseas visitors to three different areas in European country in 1987 2002

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Overseas visitors to three different areas in European country in 1987-2002

The chart depicts the number of overseas guest visited different areas in European country of 20 years from 1987 and 2007. Overall, there was an increase of visitors was dramatic in the coast and lakes. Likewise, the number of guests were upward slightly
The number of people who visited in the coast was the highest rate in three categories at the beginning of the period, at 40 thousands people in 1987 and this underwent a nearly twofold surge in 2007.Meanwhile,visitors in the mountains and the lakes started in 20 thousands and 10 thousands people respectively in 1987 and this figures for two areas showed the same trends afterward.
From the 1987 to 2002, the number of visitors increased dramatically in the coast and lakes. On the other hand, having reached its peak at more than 70 thousands people, people who visited in the lakes suddenly decreased marginally and had 50 thousands people in the end of the period. Meanwhile, tourists who visited in the mountains increased slightly in 1997 and remained this figure till the end of period. Particularly, in this place, the number of people maintained 30 thousands people in the period of 5 year from 1997 to 2002

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89005235602 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77101381889 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497382198953 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.6347076619 43.030603864 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.666666667 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8333333333 22.9334400587 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22274197635 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112081622287 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10740440973 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165834711739 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911139913444 0.0819641961636 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 11.0658536585 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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